In our foundation design class, we did a small lesson where we did the gallery walk. The way that the gallery walk work was that, we were in a small group of 3 or 4 and we would go to our own design work and critique it. We were given a paper that had these four categories- Description, Analysis, Interpretation, and Judgement.  Today, I will be looking at one of my classmates typeface design but as well as talking about my own feedback and how this will better help me in the future and help improve for MP3.

When critiquing my classmates work, I used this worksheet with four categories on it which are- Description, Analysis, Interpretation, and Judgement. For description, In my classmates work, the way that he did his design had many sharp edges and as well as, had gaps for every letter. For analysis, His design did follow up every letter with the gaps and sharp edges as well as all the letters are fully completed. For Interpretation, The letters may have seem to be futuristic in a way because of the gaps. Finally for judgement, The letters in all were very good in my eyes and he really did a wonderful job in making sure to follow the design in each letter. 

For my feedback, The way it went was that my teammates just ask me a bunch of questions such as, How did you come up with your design? Is this how you wanted it to look? Are you completed? And many more great questions. Also just me explaining my design. My design was more based off a gothic theme and I tried my best to stick with it and there was a certain design that I made sure to follow up in every letter. 

The gallery walk lesson and just the feedback could help me improve in MP3 because the feedback that was said could be in MP3 and at least now I know how I could do it and use that feedback to help me in whatever case I’ll be working on in MP3.